Fun and addicting. Please continue! :) It was just getting good! By:Tilladeonon Wed, 21 October 2009 15:27:32
I like this. Lovely style, really pulls me in. By:Sheila Deethon Sun, 13 September 2009 19:29:24
i love your rhythmic way of narration, it's like your poems.. i've always been a fan of your writing! it's so beautiful. keep it up! By:satoshi takatsuon Sat, 08 August 2009 20:59:04
This one has hooked me; I like the concept, and you write well. By:RLB Hartmannon Thu, 06 August 2009 17:27:15